Prompt: How did the writing process (brainstorming, drafting, revising, proofreading, and finalizing) shape the strength of the final essay, and what was learned about your personal strengths and areas for growth as a writer?

 Prompt Response: Due to the multiple steps plus the stop and go method of writing for the essay allowed the finer details to be more filled in. The extra time and separating steps allowed for detail that could not have been present if it all was done in one shot. 


Summary: In class we typed up our essays and submitted them.


Reflection: I believe the trick to making a writing piece is writing and editing it in pieces. When you have multiple breaks you can see which pieces don't quite align. Thereby enhancing your paper. 

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