Prompt: Reflect on your writing process for essays. Which part of writing an essay do you struggle with the most (for example: developing a thesis, organizing ideas, finding strong evidence, writing introductions, or explaining your analysis)? Which parts of essay writing do you feel most confident about? Explain why you feel strong in those areas and what specifically makes the challenging part difficult for you. Include at least one goal for how you plan to improve your essay writing skills.

 Prompt Response: The part of the essay that I struggle with the most is commentary/explaining my evidence with how it connects to the claim of the paragraph. The part of the essay I feel most comfortable writing about is getting quotes and writing those down because I feel like I always know where to look just not to articulate what I am seeing. I plan to improve my writing by thinking about explaining quotes by remembering how they connect back to the main claim of the paragraph so I can keep on track. 


Summary: In class we went over the introduction and conclusion for our essay, then I started writing my draft in class. 


Reflection: Since Mr. Reese has given us a lot of planning time. I feel pretty confident going into writing the essay Wednesday. I think having this planner makes things a lot easier and I’ll try to capitalize on this opportunity to expand my writing skills further. 



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